Sunday, November 29, 2009

The Road movie review

Okay, how does anyone with a username of "bloodmeridian2004" watch an adaptation of McCarthy's work objectively?

I don't.

And for the first hour or so of the film, I could feel just the twinge of a mirgraine.

I wanted to hate this film.

But--I became emotionally engaged and the ending moved me.

And that's how I judge movies.

If I was moved, it worked.

And it reinforced the notion that endings are important.

As credits rolled, most of us shuffled out fighting back tears--and I don't think we could have offered the filmmakers a better compliment than that.

Thursday, November 26, 2009

The Messenger movie review

I read a fantastic review for THE MESSENGER in the New Yorker:

http://www.newyorker.com/arts/critics/cinema/2009/11/16/091116crci_cinema_denby

So I decided to see it (thankfully one cinema was showing it.)

And I lamented the fact that it's in limited release while we are deluged with 2012 and NEW MOON.

What surprised me most was the physicality of Woody Harrelson, who is pitch-perfect as the commanding officer over Ben Foster--his new recruit for an Army detail that brings death notifications to next-of-kin stateside.

I was delighted that the movie evoked the emotional impact I was looking for in my spec scripts, IN SMALL WAR and KARST.

And Samantha Morton was a fantastic love interest.

Thursday, November 19, 2009

2012 Movie Review

Fantastic special effects aren't enough to save bad dialogue.


The phase I'm going through now--as an amateur screenwriter hoping to make a sale--is to focus on movie dialogue in an effort to understand its rhythm and purpose.


Lately I've paid particular attention to "buttons:" the witty little last words that end a scene.


There are tons of buttons in 2012: some comedic; some expository; some dramatic--and all felt overwritten.


It's as if so many cooks were in the kitchen each were afraid that if the button were missing, that the audience would get lost.


So--the effect is that this is a TV movie with loads of expensive special effects.


It's instructive though, because it's politically correct to have very little offensive language and zero sex.


I don't know if I will ever learn my lesson.


I don't know if it's worth it to write for a PG-13.


I'd like to try though--but it doesn't ring true to me.


In the most literal sense--I'm considering going back through my old scripts to try and make them PG-13.


And if I ever dare write what I really feel--I'll try to pitch it as a cable series--which seems to be the last bastion for mature entertainment.

Tuesday, November 17, 2009

F. Scott Fitzgerald and Hollywood

Fantastic article in the New Yorker about F. Scott Fitzgerald's failure as a screenwriter: http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2009/11/16/091116fa_fact_krystal

It's amazing how he never gave up writing long narrative descriptions that were totally unfilmable.

Sunday, November 15, 2009

Paranormal Activity Movie Review

Perhaps there's a trendy new word out there to describe these hand-held camera movies.

From my own experience, I was blown away by THE BLAIR WITCH PROJECT.

And, then there was "Blair Witch" meets "Godzilla" which equaled CLOVERFIELD.

I loved both of those films for the same reason I love PARANORMAL ACTIVITY.

Intimacy.

Failing a Google search for a cool new word to describe this hand-held phenomenon, I shall extrapolate a literary term (perhaps too loosely) and say that I regard these movies to be the cinematic expression of confessional poetry.

I consider PARANOMAL ACTIVITY to be "Blair Witch" meets "Poltergeist."

And what makes it ring true is the relationship between our common-law husband/wife dual protagonists.

The guy tries to fix things like a macho man and the girl keeps telling him that he is useless.

So everyone can relate to that, right?

:-)

Thursday, November 12, 2009

Punching Keys

I'm writing a bible.

It's my first effort at such a biblical task.

I mean, after all, the world needs another police procedural, doesn't it?